Laos101's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cooking (bocodamondo)]

Decent,

I dont care if God voices for your movie. Its about a mixture of sound, animation quality, and the story.

The sounds are not all on cue. Could use some balancing and better mixing. Also the english is really bad from the majority of the actors. The ending was awful to listen to (The wretching sounds).

Animations are subpar to the Newgrounds standard of high quality animations. But it certainly isnt awful. The animations of people interacting hand in hand is not very good either. I think some emphasis on making the animations more blended and less 'blocky' would be a good effort.

Story has a fairly good beginning, middle, and end for a Flash. I see no problems with it

Certainly isnt a masterpiece, but the quality shows. This wasn't done overnight, nor was it a 30 second short, this was a decently long. Though i would not call it a 'funny' story.

The most emphasis you need is better sound mixing, MUCH better english (too many typos to count) and definetly some smoother animations.

bocodamondo responds:

ok thanks for info :D im do it,i keep training my english

[Renaissance]

Excellent

Heres what i *think* its trying to say

Lets start with the first scene where he closes his eyes and then all of a sudden everyone's gone and only " Phantoms" are around. It symbolizes you cant just wait for everything to just dissapere and move along, you gotta act along with it, or you'll miss it eternally.

Next, is the girl on the train, I Feel that symbolizes that you cant follow a daily routine, or else you accomplish nothing except what you intend to accomplish. You need to fall out of loop, and to explore, be more than " Just a drop of water in an open sea" of people

Following that is the Blind woman in a dress playing the Violin, it symbolizes that the truth is blind, it can do its job, gracefully. But is blind unless one guides it. and follows it

Then you have the Mother and her child clinging to her, she then closes her eyes and blocks the child's Symbolizing everything isn't well, the hatred shall be blinded, ignore it, just, ignore it. The Industrilization, Terrorism, And Rioting symbolize this Hatred and anger, and fear.

Then it shows the same guy running again, this time, he reaches the end to see what he running through was a lie. a "fake" Meaning this life and world is a lie, and to achieve what you want you must overcome the lies and blindness

He gives up, letting the dust in the wind or time, and the lies overcome him.

Then it shows random scenes of all things blowing away, and then he moves backwards. Showing time as it was before him,

Finally it ends with the mask, symbolizing. Are these lies real? Or was it all a mere dream..

AloneInTheDark responds:

Thank you for your review. It was really interesting to read. Take care

[Hey Newgrounds]

excellent

it sounds like a IRC channel on Undernet :P

the spelling is WHAT MAKES 70% OF IT FUNNY GUY UNDER ME!

SeizureDog responds:

And the other 30%? :O

[Rise of the Empire]

o.0

ok.....

I'm not a big fan of such films, sry.

rexCo responds:

ok, well it is passing i dont care what you think

[J-tv Jelli Chat]

Pretty good,

Nice, but a little off touch, it was a bit short, and needed more thrill

like maybe adding Purple bein hit by an avalench or somthing around those lines. You know 2 ppl just chatin around for the whole movie and 1 getting pissed at the end isn't great

needs a blooper more in the red and green area.

J-TV responds:

this was our first in a long line of episodes and we improvised the whole convisation but when we next do a subject i think we may script and then animate, thanks for the good score though

[South Parks Death]

well...

it has its ups and downs, sound was good, has its style, graphics werent the best in town, nice soundtrack btw

poor, poor kenny

joshuaskillsrobles responds:

lol yeah he always dies. And his parents get busy alot.