Laos101's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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Pretty good needs more story somtimes

its good, but pretty short and no storyline, some flashs dont need storyline like this one, but i always like to see some storyline

[Naruto Party IV]

*insert thumb pointing upward*

Excellent style in art, thats a style i like in art, you used very good clips, and put em in good music quality, and synchronized em with good animations. A+

[F E A R]

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I have to say this feeling, this dream, this emotion goes through every child human being of the 21st century

and we hope it never happens

[Autumn Tree]

its good, its correct

I remember watching this a while back, roughly around the time this got a newgrounds award i saw it on UGO

What reminded me of this was when teh Sister of Rachel Scott ( Was it scott, blasted memory. Anyways Rachel Scott was one of the first people to be killed ) she went on to describe all the events, preluding, about her sister, tapes of the incident etc. A real heatbreak to show to us.

Moving along, i decided to check this out again and well this is what i thought

you got a good deal correct. Yes, that the blonde haired kid ( I dont wanna use names becuase i cant remember the names) helped out the purple haired kid ( lets call him purple :P ) after a fight, and they quickly became friends since people thought of em as different

ANyways to the scene of the map and Final Judgement. The map woulda been a bit more realistic if you decided to make it outline the Library and the Cafeteria. The Plan was that they would set bombs in the area, then move to the Library and attempt their killing spree there. The arrow of entry i believe was to the cafeteria, which was right since they killed rachel on their way to the cafeteria. The Dave conversation i dont know happened, but as for dave himself, he was alive, and real. When the Teacher was killed in the hallway, that never happened. The only teacher to be killed was in the Library with most of the others

The cafeteria scene was right, the god conversation was real
and the andy conversation was correct.

You did well, i'd say a few things were wrong but doesnt really matter, the teacher part made things more dramatic so i see why it was there.

[Renaissance]

Excellent

Heres what i *think* its trying to say

Lets start with the first scene where he closes his eyes and then all of a sudden everyone's gone and only " Phantoms" are around. It symbolizes you cant just wait for everything to just dissapere and move along, you gotta act along with it, or you'll miss it eternally.

Next, is the girl on the train, I Feel that symbolizes that you cant follow a daily routine, or else you accomplish nothing except what you intend to accomplish. You need to fall out of loop, and to explore, be more than " Just a drop of water in an open sea" of people

Following that is the Blind woman in a dress playing the Violin, it symbolizes that the truth is blind, it can do its job, gracefully. But is blind unless one guides it. and follows it

Then you have the Mother and her child clinging to her, she then closes her eyes and blocks the child's Symbolizing everything isn't well, the hatred shall be blinded, ignore it, just, ignore it. The Industrilization, Terrorism, And Rioting symbolize this Hatred and anger, and fear.

Then it shows the same guy running again, this time, he reaches the end to see what he running through was a lie. a "fake" Meaning this life and world is a lie, and to achieve what you want you must overcome the lies and blindness

He gives up, letting the dust in the wind or time, and the lies overcome him.

Then it shows random scenes of all things blowing away, and then he moves backwards. Showing time as it was before him,

Finally it ends with the mask, symbolizing. Are these lies real? Or was it all a mere dream..

AloneInTheDark responds:

Thank you for your review. It was really interesting to read. Take care

[Meteor High: Episode 1]

Good Work!

That really has a good style to it, a good balance of jokes, flashbacks, nonesense, and just plain old good

but, the pant graphics of Jon need less circles, they seem too baggy or, poorly made

other than that, excellent!